Today me and my class were writting about lockdown paradise we had to make up our own story.
Lockdown paradise
It was a really hot day. In paradise I thought my body was being cooked by the sun.
Lucky I had a cooler with cold water bottles and It also In the best spot because there was so much shade there also after I drank my cold water bottle I cooled down and fell asleep then It was really starting to feel like paradise until this big luxurious boat came past It was shiny I tried to swim to It but before I was about to get to the water I just remembered I didn't know how to swim and the sun kept on getting hotter and hotter until I got back In the shade I tried get a cold water bottle from the cooler but when I looked In the cooler the water bottles were not cold anymore they were warm and I was so thirsty so just drank the warm water but I cooling down slowly until the sun came down.
I enjoyed writting the story.but I found nothing challenging and my next steps are to writte more.
What was your lockdown paradise about?
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